帮我修改英文简历的错误

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这是我中英文简历里面得一些对照，大家帮我看看1.中英文大意能不能对上。2.英文有没有用词不太恰当或用错的：
中国移动宁波分公司市场部实习，担任实习生小组组长。
Work in Marketing Dep. as a team leader.

新业务推广中，一周推销手机邮箱和12580近百个，远远超过其他实习生。
Promote New Service including mobile e-mail and 12580 about 100 per week, and do more excellent than others.

参加了1个月的市场营销、电话营销培训，并进行实战练习，半天有效地发放传单2000份，顺利完成了任务。
Attend the training for 1 month, and hand out 2000 files half of the day in practice.

咨询任务成功率低（采访20家一般只能成功1家），但仍能在高压力下正常工作。
Work naturally under high pressure, although the success rate is low.

受聘为医学院学生会“外联特别顾问”。
Consultant of Public Relations in Student Union.

努力创新，采用全新“生活外联”的工作方式，一年中为学生会拉得赞助近20000元。
Use an innovative method on PR, and at last pull 20000 Yuan’s support in one year.

从400多名学生中脱颖而出，入选启真，接受学院的领导力培训。
Stand out from 400 students, and enter into Qizhen where I train myself in leadership.

学员们一起组织了许多名人、校友的来访活动，更多的学到了怎样与优秀的人一起共事。
Organize many act

中国移动宁波分公司市场部实习，担任实习生小组组长
Ningbo branch of China Mobile Marketing internship, interns serve as team leader

新业务推广中，一周推销手机邮箱和12580近百个，远远超过其他实习生。
To promote new business, selling a week-mail and phone 12580 100 000, far more than other interns.

参加了1个月的市场营销、电话营销培训，并进行实战练习，半天有效地发放传单2000份，顺利完成了任务。
Participated in an on marketing, telemarketing training, and combat practice, effectively a half-day release copies of leaflets in 2000, successfully completed the task

咨询任务成功率低（采访20家一般只能成功1家），但仍能在高压力下正常工作。
Advisory mission success rate is low (20 interviews in general can only be a success), but still under the pressure of the high work properly

受聘为医学院学生会“外联特别顾问”。
Medical school students for employment as a "Special Adviser to the outreach."

努力创新，采用全新“生活外联”的工作方式，一年中为学生会拉得赞助近20000元。

Innovation efforts, a new "life outreach" work, for the year, students will have to pull sponsorship of