麻烦帮我修改一下

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麻烦帮我修改一下Look! This is my ido ， Bill Gates’s room. Is his room beautiful? I think it is beautiful. Where is the books？Oh! They are in the very big bookcase. The pillows are on the sofa. The plant is beside the bookcase.I am very like the big fish tank. There are many lovely fish in it.In the more fishs , I like dolphin the best.
I hope I can have this room.

应该是where "are" the books.
"I am very like the big fish tank."最好改成"i like the big fish tank very much."
"In the more fishs ,"改成"In all the fish,"

Gates's - Gates'
Is it - Isn't it
is the books - are the books
in - on
pillows - cushions
am very like - like ....very much
are many - is a lot of
in the more fishs - out of all the fish
hope - wish
can - could

"In the more fishs ,"改成"In all the fish,"
"I am very like the big fish tank."改成"i like the big fish tank very much."

where "are" the books