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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/26 10:37:08
According to the statistics, only 58% of college graduates could find jobs in their specialties. Nowadays, the increasing number of unemployable graduates brings lots of wickedness to themselves and the whole society.
At first, the unemployment of graduates causes a lot of psychological problems. The university students always be afraid of finding jobs, they put their biographical notes on website but always get nothing. At last, some graduates refuse to find jobs and only stay in house days and nights. Some of them even commit suicide because of the huge press. Without the income from employment, some poor families are always about to can’t afford the daily cost.
Secondly, the fact that graduates can’t find work also defers the pace of economy. The efficiency of producing slow down without outstanding controllers. As for the social security, some unemployable graduates starts thieving, plundering or deceiving, in order to get enough money for their lives.
So what should

According to the statistics, there are only 58% of the college graduates could find jobs based on their majors. Nowadays, the increasing number of the unemployed graduates bring a lot of unstability to themselvers, also to the overall society.

First of all, these unemployed graduates might encouter psychological problems. Students in university sometimes are fear of finding jobs. Although they post their resume on the website, they seldom get replies. Some of them even refuse to look for employment and at last commit suicide owing to the social stress. Without the income, poor families could not afford the daily expenditure!

Secondly, the low employment rate amoung the new graduates becomes an adverse factor of the economy growth. The productility decreases. The other perspective of the unemployment is the increasing crime rate, which is caused by the group of people with low income.

What can we do and what should we do when facing the employment iss