UC知道英语达人帮忙修改一下这篇英文啦，30%的assignment呢，谢谢
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帮忙给下面的文章加个题目和结尾。我交的draft老师说对话部分不好太，可我也不知道怎么改，帮忙改一下。拜托啦。很急的。
Today was his mother’s birthday. When his mother waked up, she saw a beautiful jewel box lying on her night table. The mother was very excited and she opened the box quivering. Then she found a turquoise necklace.
How startled she was! She just a babysitter and her family was too poor to buy even a low-cost necklace. How about the dear turquoise necklace?
As quick as possible, she asked Tim, who was her son and just seven-year-old, to wake up. She asked:
“Where did the necklace come from?”
“I bought it from a jewel store at the corner of the 5th street.”Tim said.
“You bought it from the jewel store?” She repeated uncertainly.
“Yes, and it cost all my pocket money.” Tim answered excitedly.
His mother said nothing and just stared at his eyes quietly. Suddenly, she gave him a slap on the cheek.
“Why did you tell me the lie? You just had several coins and how could you buy such an exp
Today was his mother’s birthday. When his mother waked up, she saw a beautiful jewel box lying on her night table. The mother was very excited and she opened the box quivering. Then she found a turquoise necklace.
How startled she was! She just a babysitter and her family was too poor to buy even a low-cost necklace. How about the dear turquoise necklace?
As quick as possible, she asked Tim, who was her son and just seven-year-old, to wake up. She asked:
“Where did the necklace come from?”
“I bought it from a jewel store at the corner of the 5th street.”Tim said.
“You bought it from the jewel store?” She repeated uncertainly.
“Yes, and it cost all my pocket money.” Tim answered excitedly.
His mother said nothing and just stared at his eyes quietly. Suddenly, she gave him a slap on the cheek.
“Why did you tell me the lie? You just had several coins and how could you buy such an exp
今天是他母亲的生日。当他的母亲醒来，她看到了美丽的珠宝盒躺在她晚上就座。母亲当时非常兴奋，她打开盒子颤抖。然后，她发现了绿松石项链。
如何一惊，她！她只是一个保姆和她的家人太穷，买连低成本项链。如何亲爱的绿松石项链？
尽快，她问添，谁是她的儿子和刚刚7岁，唤醒。她问：
“如果没有项链从何而来？ ”
“我买它从一个珠宝店的角落第五街上。 ”蒂姆说。
“你买的宝石商店吗？ ”她反复不定。
“是的，它的成本我所有的零花钱。 ”添激动地回答。
他的母亲没有说什么和公正的盯着他的眼睛静静地。突然间，她给了他一记耳光的脸颊。
“你为什么告诉我何在？你刚才有几个硬币，你怎么可以购买这种昂贵的项链？ “
“我... ...我没有告诉的谎言。我真的买了用我自己的钱。 “蒂姆开始哭可悲的。
的费用绿松石项链超过数百美元。作为一个贫困家庭的孩子，他不能有能力购买它。他必须thieve从珠宝商店。正如蒂姆的母亲，她认为这样性质的东西。
在珠宝商店，店主正在考虑一件事，昨天发生时，一个简朴而整洁夫人进入商店。她焦急地环顾四周，然后来到了柜台。
由于店主的视线，那位女士开了一家珠宝盒，取出一个光辉的绿松石项链。
“我很遗憾，但我认为这条项链一定是你店里的商品。今天是我的生日和我的儿子想给我一个惊喜，所以他说