UC知道(英语)高手来看这句话有无语病?
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My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop，the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minutes.Next I walk to school.
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My home is about 5 kilometers from school. I get up at seven o'clock.I eat a quick breakfast .Then I walk to the bus stop，the early bus takes me to school. It takes about 20 minutes.Next I walk to school.
(有没有类似这种的文章 明天要演讲...限2分钟以上 如果有 定会加悬赏 谢谢了)
有一句你是想说你快速的吃完早饭,这句不对,应该是I eat breakfast quikly.要是都用一般现在时的话。最后一句，Next不对，应该是and then.看的出来这个应该是你自己写的 。
next改为then比较好点
My home is about 5 kilometers away from school. I get up at seven o'clock.After having a quick breakfast , I walk to the bus stop.The early bus takes me to school. It takes me about 20 minutes.Finally I walk to school.你看这样行不？
改成这样更好：My home is about 5 kilometers from school .I usually get up at seven o'clock .After eating a quick breakfast ,I walk to the bus stop and the early bus will take me to school within bout 20 minutes .Finally ,I walk towards my school .