大家帮我给一个句子挑挑错误~

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/19 10:55:48
His handwriting is really beautiful, and so is his study.
这句话对么?我要讲的意思是:他的书法非常漂亮,他学习也一样好。
如果有错误,应该怎么改呢?
谢谢大家了~
希望改正的句子能漂亮一点,不要两个简单句。虽然没有错误,但是也毫无新意啊。呵呵

His handwriting is really fine,so be his study.(读着好像有点别扭)
His handwriting is really beautiful;his study likewise.

后面的study就不可以用beautiful来修饰了
如果你要用这种句型的话,你可以这样说:
His handwriting is really good, and so is his study.
在这里用good就要好多了

这样说,给我的感觉就像你在说“他的学习也非常漂亮”。如果你想说他的书法好,学习好就得分写成两句话。
His handwriting is really beautiful.
He's good at studying.

beautiful这个词轻易不要用,是个中性词。再就是后一句,你不觉读起来拗口吗?

His handwriting is very perfect, also he is good in study.

从语法上讲是没有问题的,不过一般不用beautiful来修饰handwriting,字写得很漂亮是中国人说话的习惯,而在英语中我们常用good来修饰handwriting和sutdy

study 不会用 beautiful 来形容.

His handwriting is really beautiful, and he studies well also.