请大家给我的一个句子挑挑错误

and so 是因此的意思，不能这么用，你可以用as well as...

这句话语法没错，但书法用beautiful修饰是可以的，用来修饰学习就比较勉强。如果按照美国人的习惯，他们很喜欢用great，它和中国人的“棒极了”的意思一样，那么修饰学习也很合适：His handwriting is great, and so is his study.
问题是你又想写得漂亮一点，那么形容词不妨用marvellous（不可思议的; 惊奇的; 非凡的; 奇迹般的; 了不起的）或wonderful（令人惊奇的, 惊人的, 可惊叹的, 奇妙的，[口语]极好的, 好极了）。那么，你的句子不妨改成：
His handwriting is wonderful, and his study is even more outstanding(更杰出，更出类拔萃）。

你那英语的翻译是:
His handwriting is really beautiful, and so is his study.
他的笔迹确实是美丽的，所以是他的研究。

与你说的意思的点来同,不如看一下这一句:
His calligraphy(handwriting) is very beautiful, as well as learn from him.

希望能帮到你``

His handwriting is pretty good,as well as his studying result.

His handwriting is really as excellent as his study./ His handwriting is really excellent, so is his study.

有错，beautiful可以用来形容“书法”，但不能用来形容“学习”。

His calligraphy is outstanding, and so is his academic record.

OR——

His academic record is as impressing as