UC知道高手帮我批改一下作文（六级的），并评一下分，谢谢
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With the developed of society, a number of farmers have an opportunity to work in big as well as prosperous cities to earn more money for their poverty families. As a result, it increasingly becomes very popular phenomenon that left-behind children in the countryside.
Many disadvantage aspects have been found in these children who are left in their homes. To begin with , it is education problem. Just as an old saying that parents are the first teacher in their children. Good habit of writing homework and diligent manners would have been kept on children who are still young unless their parents have taken good care of. What’s more, in view of left-behind children’s parents work out of countryside for long term, these children will feel lonelier along with lack of a lot of love from their parents than children who are in the same ages. Including cause psychology diseases as long as they are short of communication with their parents .Besid
With the developING society, a number of farmers have an opportunity to work in big as well as prosperous cities to earn more money for their poverty families. As a result, it increasingly becomes A very popular phenomenon THAT children WAS LEFT in the countryside.
Many disadvantageS have been found in these children who are left AT their homes. To begin with , it is education problem. Just as an old saying GOES that parents are the first teacher OF their children. Good habit of writing homework and diligent manners would have been kept on children who are still young unless their parents have taken good care of. What’s more, in view of left-behind children’s parents work out of countryside for long term, these children will feel MORE LONELY along with LESS love from their parents than children who are in the same ages.IT MAY cause psychology diseases as long as short of communication with their parents .Besides, without parents cookING delicious food, left-behind chil