帮我看下有没语法错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/29 06:07:10
As an English fan, I very much hope that participate in the English race. The English Premier League match gives me a very good opportunity, he will allow me to show myself, I can further the standard of English. I will strive and fight for success. I wish good luck.

帮我看下有没语法错误或提点建议在线等

I will strive and fight for success 改为 I will stive to success更好！
can further the standard of English further改为meet the standard
什么是English race？
再改一下 The English Premier League match gives me a very good opportunity which allow me to show myself
I very much hope that participate in the English race改为 I look forward to partticipating in the English race!
I wish good luck. 改为 Good luck to me!
我觉得改成这样更有英语味道！ 见笑了！

As an English fan, I look forward to partticipating in the English race!The English Premier League match gives me a very good opportunity which allow me to show myself, I can meet the standard of English. I will strive to success. Good luck to me!

差不多吧，不过那个very much hope-->very hope 感觉好些，very much 感觉别扭啊，呵呵，可以i very hope to participate in ``````
he will allow me to ``````--->it will````好些吧?
大概就这些了，你看看其他的人怎么说吧，祝你好运~~！