帮我检查以下有没有语法错误?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/11 19:20:51
The inborn qualities of some are what others try to
achieve for life. Some people fulfilled their life long
dream at death while others losses what have had from
the birth.

The inborn qualities of some are what others try to
achieve for life. Some people fulfilled their life long
dream at death while others losses what they have had from
the birth.

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The inborn qualities (如果说of some的话, 你要说of谁的/什么的)are what others are trying to achieve in(是in life, 而不是for life) life. Some people have fulfilled their life long dreams at death while others lose(是lose, 而不是losses, 因为现在是在说复数的)what they have had from their birth.

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