帮我看看有没有语法错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/21 11:36:09
是这样的一句话:
I want to fly,and fly to the heaven belongs to us.Together with me ,do you want??

Don't you want to fly together with me to the promised land of ours?
原句太中国,重新组织了一下。

I want to fly,and fly to the heaven,which belongs to us.Together with me ,do you want to?

do you want to ?

I want to fly to the paradise belongs to us.Do you want to go with me?