帮我看看这些句子有没有语法错误

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/16 09:42:01
Hawaiian Islands, with enough sunshine, fine climate and four seasons warm as spring, is famous in the world as a resort of preventing heat and cold, traveling and convalescence.

这是我翻译的,帮忙看一下,谢谢

Hawaiian Islands, with abundant sunshine, mild climate and four seasons as warm as spring, is famous to the world as a resort for those fond of traveling, needing a recuperation, and seeking for a shield from harsh heat and cold.

毛病没有，但是我觉得还可以改进。

支持楼上的

is 改为 are , 因为主语为Islands