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I have travelled in Beijing. It was a great journey. We first visited the Great Wall, which showed the wisdom of ancient Chinese. Then we went to visit the Tian'anmen Square. It was also fantastic.
I then felt proud to be a Chinese. The small tranditional Beijing house called Sihe Yuan (which means our-section compound) was also very interesting. I love Beijing.

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i have been Beijing for a travel. it was a great journey.we went to the Great Wall first.The Great Wall shows the wisdom of ancient chinese. Then we went to visit Tianan Men Square.it is also fantastic. As a Chinese, I am very proud of them. There is a kind of small house in Beijing,it is a traditional Beijing buiding called 'four-section compound'it is very interesting. i love Beijing

i have been to Beijing for a tour. It was a great journey.We went to the Great Wall first. The Great Wall shows the wisdom of the ancient Chinese. Then we went to visit the