英语日记——Today I was very unluckily

Today I was very unlucky

Today, my good friend and I went shopping together.Near the shop, I did not notice a banana peel on the ground, and I stepped on it and had a fall,and my hands and legs were hurt,too.When I got up, I found that many people were watching me, I was very embarrassed. How unlucky today is!

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题目有问题唉！
unluckily是副词，不能放在be动词后！

不是吧……

首先，题目应是“Today I was very unlucky”
日期 Sunday
Today is sunday.I don't have to go to school.I suggested to go to the park with my classmates yestorday,but I woke too late that I couldn't catch the bus we decised!Luckily,all my classmates were waiting for me at the bus stop.After playing,I went home.I arrived as soon as I notised that I left my key on the bus! What an unlucky day！
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