麻烦请评价一下这首英文诗

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Yes,I love the way you love me.
Once you don't love me.We are over.
I'm so bad.

Yes,I loved your eyes.But now,I don't have any feel of them.
I love the people whoever have bright eyes.
I didn't beat by you,but myself.
I open my heart.I'm wrong.
I moved my heart to a wrong place.
I don't know how to save it.

Yes,I'm just a kid.
I am lower than you.
There's no reason for me to get the love from you.

Feel mistake!! Alone.

There is always the way to get out.
Belief!!

My fault.
If there wasn't me,nothing would happened.
Take sorrow not only to myself,but also to you.
I aplogize. Fogive me,please!!

I am sorry.
Lucky,you seemed very well.
Aman...
虽然文字比较简单
希望大家评价一下主人的感情
和写作的意图
开导一下作者

就是爱一个人爱的无可救药
写作意图 也许是发泄
不过这种感情问题要他自己发现要自己走出来 即使你开导了 但是第二次呢 第三次呢?

有真情实感.直率,理智,但有一点自暴自弃