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He is a myth. Oliver and his father together in the backyard to play. Only then courtyard of a break basket ball, he is the father of their own doing. His ideal is to become like their father basketball player. So he diligently every day to practice, under the guidance of his father. His father is very harsh, often scolding him. But he did not complain, but more of hard practice. University, his basketball talents gradually revealed. He is the leader of the school basketball, coaches usually let him go for the ball most critical, and he was not too disappointed coach. Under his leadership, his team scored many victories. Finally, by virtue of a superior basketball skill, he entered the NBA. He would like to be able to create their own world, but he is wrong. Here are bad everywhere. Gambling, fights, sex. He retreat. But he heard the voices of a father, the father said the children, the world is dark, you need to use your strength to overcome him. you are my children, I believe you can

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