哪位能帮我改一下下面的文章呢?谢谢。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/05 07:30:52
The materail resources that creat wealth, no matter how they are distributed initially, they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people are then in possession of the other’s wealth, which will be used to generate and accumulate wealth for their benefits.All above is the root cause for the high efficiency of free market and the wealth will transfer dynamicly and simulteneously from the low-efficiency sectors to high-rfficiency ones.
Wealth itself cannot guarantee you more wealth in the future, as they cannot accumulate by themselves. The descendants of the entrepreneurs, who obtain wealth with their entrepreneurail spirit,cannot always utilize the wealth at their disposal most efficiently.In the societies ranked by indentity, the resource-using efficiency of the whole society is undermined. However, under the system of free market, the wealth of high ranked families can be transferred to the people with entrepr

The material resources that creat wealth, no matter how they are distributed initially, they will flow into the hands of the people with entrepreneurial spirit--- a basic tendency of free market.These people are then in possession of the other’s wealth, generate and accumulate wealth for their benefits.All above is the root cause for the high efficiency of free market and the wealth will transfer dynamicly and simulteneously from the low-efficiency sectors to high-efficiency ones.
Wealth itself cannot guarantee you more wealth in the future, as they cannot accumulate by themselves. The descendants of the entrepreneurs, who obtain wealth with their entrepreneurail spirit,cannot always utilize the wealth at their disposal efficiently.In the societies ranked by indentity, the resource-using efficiency of the whole society is undermined. However, under the system of free market, the wealth of high ranked families can be transferred to the people with entrepreneurial spirit effortl