UC知道帮忙批改下一篇英语作文，万分感谢
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说明：以Daniel Trade 公司市场部经理李华的身份于6月15日给John Holland 先生写一封催款信，信中应当包括以下内容：
1.问及Holland 先生近况；
2.要求Holland 先生尽快支付10，000元贷款，该笔款项已经过期10天；
3.随信寄上公司最新的夏季产品目录，希望Holland 先生尽早寄来新的订单，可享受公司的优惠价格。
注意：务必按业务信函的格式书写。
Words for reference：
优惠价格：special offers 过期：overdue
John Holland,
Every is going well?There is a thing need you to do it hurry.Please pay 10,000 as soon as possible .This program is overdue ten days.With the letter is a up to date summer product list. I hope Mr Holland to send a new order form.If you do like that,you can share special offers.That all.I hope you can continue to co-operation.Thank you!
Yours friendly
Daniel Trade
1.问及Holland 先生近况；
2.要求Holland 先生尽快支付10，000元贷款，该笔款项已经过期10天；
3.随信寄上公司最新的夏季产品目录，希望Holland 先生尽早寄来新的订单，可享受公司的优惠价格。
注意：务必按业务信函的格式书写。
Words for reference：
优惠价格：special offers 过期：overdue
John Holland,
Every is going well?There is a thing need you to do it hurry.Please pay 10,000 as soon as possible .This program is overdue ten days.With the letter is a up to date summer product list. I hope Mr Holland to send a new order form.If you do like that,you can share special offers.That all.I hope you can continue to co-operation.Thank you!
Yours friendly
Daniel Trade
John Holland,
Every is going well?(Is everything going well?)There is a thing (that) need you to do ( )hurry(hurriedly)..Please pay 10,000 as soon as possible .This program is overdue ten days.With the letter is a up to date summer product list. I hope Mr Holland to(will) send a new order form.If you do like that,you can share special offers.That('s) all.I hope you can continue to co-operation.Thank you!
Your friend,
Daniel Trade
Every is going well?---Everything is going well?
There is a thing need you to do it hurry.---There is a thing that needs you to do hurry.
That all.---That's all.
另外，这一句也有问题，但我没看明白你是什么意思，不好改。
With the letter is a up to date summer product list.