我能在今晚8点10分英语考试后来你家吗？ 翻译

may i go to yours' at about 10 past 8 after the english exam this night?

口语的话：
may i go to yours' at 10 past 8 this night? after the english exam.

My I visit your home at eight ten tonight after the English exam?

i am going to your home at 8:10 after examination,ok?

May I come to your home after the English test at 8:10?

My I visit your home at eight ten tonight after the English exam?