看看下面的英语有错误没 请指教,快啊谢谢

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/19 18:57:18
RRR is the musician whom I respect very much .
I still remember the first time I watched his concert on TV.
For me, that performance is indelible memory.
The beautiful violin melody in the waves in my mind made me think too much tears.
The music AAA has been accompanied me with the time of a number of difficulties .
It brings me to the world of fantasy, without the troubles brought by the reality .
Music is God-given gift for the people, bringring strength and confidence to overcome obstacles.
it makes people believe that living in this world is so beautiful experience.

indelible memory改为 an indelible memory
The beautiful violin melody in the waves in my mind made me think too much tears. 这句话什么意思??
The music AAA has been accompanied me with the time of a number of difficulties .
改为
The music AAA has accompanied me when I 'm in difficulty.
It brings me to the world of fantasy, without the troubles brought by the reality .改为It brings me to the world of fantasy, a world free of worldly trifles.
God-given gift for the people改为a God-given gift for people
so beautiful experience改为such beautiful experience

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