帮我看看错误的地方，请指教，英语方面的~~

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谢谢大家，多提意见！我到底差成什么样子啊~~努力方向？
Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” incommon
I was born in 1986 at a town .when I born ,all people deem I will change very fat than I grown up.but in fact when I 20 year olde ,I always can’t pass 100 pound.when I was a kid ,I have stardy drawing .Drawing is so vacuity for me ,but I real like singsing song ,musice make me happy and forget all the trubble . I love mu familiy wery much .my family is my power ,no matter what happened I alway become strong ,because my parents is most important in my life,I told myself londly I never give up

文章修改过了喔.OMG.. 错的还真多.
有些不懂呢..

Hi everyone
My name is yixian ,you can call me sara,I ‘ll say “yeah” in common [<<不懂这一句.]
I was born in 1986 in a town .when I was born ,all people thought I would got much fatter when I grow up.but in fact 20 years later ,I still can’t heavier than 100 pound.when I was a child,I have study drawing .[Drawing is so vacuity for me][画画对你来说很空虚?而且空虚是名词要换形容词喔]But I really like singing song ,it makes me happy and forget all the troubles . I love my family very much .my family is my power ,no matter what happens I can always become strong again,because my parents are the most important people in my life,I tell myself londly I'll never give up when I meet the troubles.

说句实话,你的英文语法需要多学习.你的时态用得有点混乱,如说到你出生的时候,"all people deem"应该是"everybody thought that".而且词性的搭配也不对,比如"i real like ..."应该是"I really like..."单复数也要注意"my parents are"不能是"my parents is"

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