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Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, it is obviously to find that the place and time chosen are vary from person to person. Some might choose Europe in the Middle Age for admiring the tremendous architecture while others might prefer America during the Civil War due to the charm of soldier fighting fearlessly for freedom. Of all the ages and places in the past, I would like to go back to China during the Tang Dynasty.
From 618 to 907 AD, Tang Dynasty was a peak in the development of Chinese history—the economy kept increasing, the technology developed rapidly and the culture spread world-widely. Proud of being under the rules of 22 emperors one after the other, the citizen lived in harmony without any racial conflicts or terrorists’ attack.
Environmental problems have now been brought to the limelight. Compared with the condition people lived in Tang Dynasty, the environment nowadays is getting worse and wor
说句心里话 雅思不太有这样的题目 一般 是有两种观点 为你同意那一种 这个 像是老师胡乱编的
我觉得你这开头过于繁琐，或许你是用的在线翻译吧，呵呵~我们写论文一般是不提倡用在线的，它的翻译过于机械化，会有许多语法错误。我试着给你改下儿啊，不过，仅供参考，呵呵~~
大体上是没改什么，只是删了点儿句子，改了改句型，还请斟酌：
Depending on personal experience, Some might choose Europe in the Middle Age for admiring the tremendous architecture while others might prefer America during the Civil War due to the charm of soldier fighting fearlessly for freedom. Of all the ages and places in the past, I would like to go back to China during the Tang Dynasty.
From 618 to 907 AD, Tang Dynasty was a peak in the development of Chinese history—the economy kept increasing, the technology developed rapidly and the culture spread world-widely. Proud of being under the rules of 22 emperors one after the other, the citizen lived in harmony without any racial conflicts or terrorists’ attack.
Environmental problems have now been brought to the limelight. Compared with the condition that people lived in Tang Dynasty, the envir