UC知道初二英语作文~修改
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帮我修改一下~有些句子
原文：
Deng Yaping was born on the 2nd of June,1973.She started to play table tennis when she was five years old.She was very interested in playing the game.In 1983,she joined the Henan table tennis team.There she became famous.When she was only 15 years old,she joined the national table tennis team.In 1997,she went to Tsinghua University,majored in English and management.She was number I women's singles player in the ITTF from 1993 to 1998.For quite a few times,she won the first prize in the world's table tennis competition.
【把这篇文章改一下，简单一点~像初二学生的水平，像1993——1998那里，就可以用Keep】
句子多用when和at
【谢了，好的话一定加分】
原文：
Deng Yaping was born on the 2nd of June,1973.She started to play table tennis when she was five years old.She was very interested in playing the game.In 1983,she joined the Henan table tennis team.There she became famous.When she was only 15 years old,she joined the national table tennis team.In 1997,she went to Tsinghua University,majored in English and management.She was number I women's singles player in the ITTF from 1993 to 1998.For quite a few times,she won the first prize in the world's table tennis competition.
【把这篇文章改一下，简单一点~像初二学生的水平，像1993——1998那里，就可以用Keep】
句子多用when和at
【谢了，好的话一定加分】
Deng Yaping was born on the 2nd of June,1973.She took up playing table tennis when she was five years old.Then,She was very interested in it.In 1983,she joined in(参与组织用join in) the Henan Table Tennis Team.After that， she became more famous.When she was only 15 years old,she took part(=join) in the National Table Tennis Team.In 1997,she enrolled into Tsinghua University,majoring（主动形式） in English and management.She was the best women's singles player that I have seen in the ITTF from 1993 to 1998.For quite a few time
,she won the first prize in the World's Table Tennis Match(Competition多用于智力比赛).