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There was an embarrassing moment that I will never forget in my life; it occurred when I got into school cafeteria with a really disgusting stench I got accidentally. Fist I thought it was not a big deal, but what happened later change my mind. Once I found a seat and sat down, people who sit near by ran away immediately. Then, those flies came to me and flew around me, make me feel like a piece of garbage. Next, something that really broke my heart happened. When I keep enjoy my meal, a girl passed through spew the food she just ate on the floor. Also, some kids started laughing at me. Later, the cleaner work here asked me to leave with a bad attitude. Finally, I left here and swore I will never came back again.

1. I will never forget in my life ---- I would never forget in my life
2.later change my mind ---- later changed my mind
3.Once ---- 去掉
4.who sit near by ----who sat nearby
5.around me, make me feel like ---- around me, which made me feel like
6.Next ---- Then
7.When I keep enjoy my meal ----When I kept enjoying my meal
8.a girl passing through
9.Also, ????
10.the cleaner work here ----the cleaner there
11.left here ---- left there
12.I will never came back again ----I would never come back again

a girl passed through spew the food she just ate on the floor.