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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/31 03:56:19
Nowadays, in people's daily life, bad diet custom and lacks of exercise, in addition to weight neglect of themselves, so obesity become a hidden danger to people, therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates the people while weigh weight, use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate data, with the processor operate and judge, then obtained whether surpassed the standard body weight. At the last, it display the results through LCD. At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy. This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is the product of Samsung company.

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Nowadays, in people's daily life, bad diet custom and lacks of exercise,
diet - dieting, lacks - lack
in addition to weight neglect of themselves,
"not watching their own weight"更通顺
so obesity become a hidden danger to people,
以上文构造， 这里得把so变为caused
therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates the people while weigh weight,
这里得全该
use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate data,
use - using
with the processor operate and judge,
operate - operation judge - monitoring 这句得看原文才能完全修改， 不过先修改语法错误
then obtained whether surpassed the standard body weight.
得全改
At the last, it display the results through LCD.
还没到最后一点，所以At the last改为furthermore
At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy.
得全改
This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical with the S3C44B