能不能帮忙看看有无语法错误?

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Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,you can have, I can have.

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肯定有错误,
Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell---you can have it.so can i .你能拥有,我也可以

完善的生活智慧,可以有远距离转移门铃,

Perfect life with Intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,you can have

你把你想表达的中文也写上再说.

三个分句之间缺少连词,不能构成一句句子.Perfect life in the future, with intelligent Remote transfer doorbell,is available to both you and me.这样可能会好一点.