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First, it cause many inconvenience in my life, sometimes even drive me crazy.
For example, there was a time I cannot find my key, so i have to stayed at home until I got it under the keyboard,which made me being late to school.
Also, my room was messing around that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room, i feel pretty embarrassed.
Moreover, this bad habit even affect my work which directly make me loss my job.
When the first time i went my interview, I forgot to bring a chart with me, so I loss the opportunity to have that job.
Another experience I mix an important document with the waste paper and I put them into shredder, so I was fired again.
Finally, I decide to change it, and I believe life will be better after I achieve this goal.
1.that need to be change ---- that needs to be changed
2.but the one that makes so many troubles to me is disorganize.
----- especially the disorganezation that causes so many troubles.
3.it cause many inconvenience ----it causes much inconvenience
4.drive me crazy ---- drives me crazy
5. there was a time I cannot find my key ---- once I couldn't find my keys
6.have to stayed ----had to stay
7.late to school ---- late for school
8.was messing around ---- is a mess.
9. that evey time when I have some friends come to visit my room, i feel pretty embarrassed.
---- Every time my friends come to see me, i feel pretty embarrassed.
10.even affect ---- even affects
11.make me loss my job ---- makes me lose my job
12.When the first time i went my interview ---- When i went to my interview for the first time
13.so I loss ----So I lost
14.opportunity to have that job ---- opportunity of that job.
15.exp