UC知道又写了一篇6级作文，进来帮忙改一下，小弟谢谢了。
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With the development of society and economy, People have to encounter more competition than before. However, We can see an undesirable phenomenon in society. That is to say faking diplomas have became more and more common and we should immediately adopt some methods to solve it.
As we all know, faking diplomas is a extremely serious problem. There are two problems as follows. The main problem is that it is unequal to fake diplomas. People who depend on their own capacity to get diplomas may harbor the idea that it is unfair to them. The another is that young students may be affected by faking diplomas and they will follow those people who have fake diplomas.
Regarding this issue, I think the best way to solve this problem is to educate students not to buy fake diplomas and tell them it’s a irrational manner. In this way, those people who make the fake diplomas may reduce their production. All in all, it is disturbing to think that a multit
have became --is becoming
a extremely -an extremely
The another --the other
a irrational manner--an irrational
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2 faking 改为 fake .
3 a extremely 改为 an extremely .The main problem 改为The main one.
4 The another 改为 the other
5 a irrational manner 改为 an irrational
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How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas?
With the development of society and economy, People(小写) have to encounter more competition than before. However, We（改小写） can see an undesirable phenomenon in society. That is to say faking diplomas have became more and more common and we should immediately adopt some methods to solve it.
As we all know, faking diplomas is a extremely serious problem. There are two problems as follows. The main problem is that it