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The chinese New Year is the most important festival of the year.It's a tie when all the family get together.
Last year ate dumplings on New year's Eve and we stayed up late until midnight to see in the New year.We also put on New clothes.We went to visit friends,relatives and heighbors and wished them all a Happy New Year.
This year we will decorate the house with flomers and lights.We will buy presents and cuthair.We will get red packets,too.I think I will have a better time.
就是帮忙删节点就成,让它更好背而且要短,还不失原文大意
Last year ate dumplings on New year's Eve and we stayed up late until midnight to see in the New year.We also put on New clothes.We went to visit friends,relatives and heighbors and wished them all a Happy New Year.
This year we will decorate the house with flomers and lights.We will buy presents and cuthair.We will get red packets,too.I think I will have a better time.
就是帮忙删节点就成,让它更好背而且要短,还不失原文大意
改完的。...把拼写和语法错误都改了一下。.已经很简洁..不用在删了。..:)
The New Year's Day is the most important day of a year, and a tie when all the family get together.
Last year we ate dumplings on New year's Eve and stayed up late until midnight to listen to the New year's jow. We also put on New clothes to visit friends, relatives and neighbors, whishing them Happy New Year.
This year we will decorate the house with flowers and lights, and buy presents and curtains.We'll get red packets,too.I'm sure I will have a better time.