帮忙看看错在哪里 Recently even through,many people have been discussing the dangers of the internet

even through,首先不是搭配，而应该是even though尽管，但即使是这样也不对，因为even though是连词，后面要接句子的。所以，建议去掉。
dangers 这里用词不当
internet要大写的：Internet

Recently, many people have been discussing the disadvantages of the Internet.

peoples,discussed

danger

been disscussing 变成 disscussed
这里不用被动语态
是人作主语