英语作文,帮我看看语法有没有问题,谢谢

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The opportunity is element of success. The opportunity always love person who he has prepared. Do you think?

For example Lining is a formous sporter in world. He must hard train everyday. In last,he won eight gold medals in olympic games. Whe he retired,he seted up a compay. Be called Lining-sport. Because many consumers love it.so he successed. If Lining did not hard train. He did not set up comopany. So opportunity always love person who he has prepared.

Meanwhile, opportunity is hidden in setback. We can only stand up to it. We can find opportunity. Edison is a fomous inventor in world. He wanted to invent electric light. He always failed at the start. he facted many setback. But he did not give up. At last,he found a chemist element. When he used this chemist element,he invented the eletric light. So when we face setback,we can not give up. We must stand up to it. Because opportunity is hidden in setback.

From what has been mentioned above we can

语法问题 文章很不流畅 措辞不好
比如第一句改为“ opportunity is one of the elements of success”较好
“Do you think so.”一定要加so。
“in the world”要加冠词
“He must had trained very hard everyday”
“at last ”
“ Whe he retired,he seted up a compay called Lining-sport”
“he successed Because many consumers love it”
“If Lining hadn't trained so hard , He would not set up sunch a succesful comopany.”
“Only if We stand up to it can we find opportunity”

Opportunity is an element of success. It always comes to the person who has prepared himself well enough. Do you think so?

For example Lining is a formous sportman in the world. He is trained very hard everyday. He won eight gold medals in olympic games. After he retired,he set up a company called Lining-sport. He succeeded because many consumers loved it. If Lining wasn't trained so hard and did not set up the comopany, he couldn't be so successful.
Meanwhile, opportunity is hidden in setback.