英语作文,帮忙看一下有没有问题.

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The opportunity is an element of success. The opportunity always love person who he has prepared. Do you think so?

For example Lining is a formous sportman in the world. He had trained hard everyday. At last,he won eight gold medals in olympic games.He seted up a compay after he retired. This comany was called Lining-sport. he successed because many consumers love it.. If Lining was not train hard .he did not set up comopany. So opportunity always love person who he has prepared.

Meanwhile, opportunity is hidden in setback. Only stand up to it.can we get opportunity. Edison is a fomous inventor in the world. He wanted to invent electric light. He always failed at the start. he facted many setback but he did not give up. At last,he found a chemist element. When he used this chemist element,he invented the eletric light. So when we face setback,we can not give up. We can successed. Because opportunity is hidden in setback.

From what has been mentioned

（1）机会垂青于有准备的人 垂青最好用show appreciation for。。。
（2）formous=>famous
(3)sportsman=>athlete
（4）seted=>set(set-set-set)
(5)successed=>succeeded
(6)was not=>didn't
(7)We can only get opportunity when we stand up to it.
(8)fomous=>famous
(9)at the start=> at the beginning
(10)facted=> met
(11)chemist =>chemical
(12)successed=>succeeded

第一段：
1.冠词the不应该要
2.love 应为 loves
3.who 后面不应该再有 he
4.prepare 不能这样用作不及物动词
5.前两句可以合并。
6.person最好改为people,不是一个人。
建议改为：
Opportunity is an element of success, and it always loves people who are ready. Do you think so?
第二段:
1.For example 后面要有逗号
2.Lining应为 Li Ning
3.sportman 应为 sportsman
4.olympic games 首字母应该大写
5.seted up 应为set up
6.company 好几处拼写不对
7.he successed 应为 He succeeded
8.If Lining was not train hard .he did not set up comopany.一句应该用虚拟语气, was ... train 也不对，