UC知道请英语高手帮我修改四级作文（四级未过的勿进）
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Modern society is a society in which everyone is associated with credit.
We can't emphasis the importance of credit too much. What I can say surely is that a person even can't live a comfortable life without keeping credit.As it is universary acknowledged that we'll be restricted by all the financial agency if we don't pay back the money wo borrowed from banks in time.This is only a well-known example. Even on other aspects, we shoud keep our promise,too.
As an undergraduate,I think I shoud make myself a words-keeping man.If I have make a promise to do something,I will spare no effort to do it well.Only by this, can I receive the trust of others.
请大家仔细帮我查一查，我自己已经发现一个错误了，应该是universally，而不是universary,请不要复制原文，这样我会误以为你修改过了
1. keeping credit不要用keeping，直接说without credit。
2. finacial agency用复数。前面的the去掉
3. wo是你手误吧。
4. this is 一句中a变成one以示强调。
5. 最后一段If I have make变成made
语法层次上错误不多，但从语义层次来讲还不够地道，有很多说法都是Chin—English。不过就四级而言感觉你过没问题。
My View On Credit
Modern society is a society in which everyone is associated with credit.
We can't emphasis the importance of credit too much. What I can say surely is that a person even can't live a comfortable life without keeping credit.As it is universary acknowledged that we'll be restricted by all the financial agency if we don't pay back the money wo borrowed from banks in time.This is only a well-known example. Even on other aspects, we shoud keep our promise,too.
As an undergraduate,I think I shoud make myself a words-keeping man.If I have make a promise to do something,I will spare no effort to do it well.Only by this, can I receive the trust of others.
My View On Credit
Modern society is a