UC知道英语高手帮我修改一篇小作文
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An encounter of my friend
Recently, my friend bought a new bike which is very expensive and attractive. He loves it very much. Brought it only a few days later, one day, he rode it with his friend to an internet bar. Half an hour later, out of there, he suddenly found that his new bike was stolen. Getting so upset and angry, he and his friend decided to try finding it back.
His friend carried him with his bike 搜寻 in that area,抱着一丝希望，hoping that the thief has not go too far. By chance, they found a man who was riding a bike the same as his lost one. Because of he has made a sign on his bike before, he could recognize the bike at first sight. “Please stop, sir!” he shouted.however, quite reverse, the riding man speed up at once. at that moment, the two 嫉恶如仇的boys could conclude that he 就是 the thief. So his friend rode his bike to catch the thief while he was running after them. Due to not knowing that terrain so much, the thief soon rode into an impassable lane. The two boys rus
Recently, my friend bought a new bike which is very expensive and attractive. He loves it very much. Brought it only a few days later, one day, he rode it with his friend to an internet bar. Half an hour later, out of there, he suddenly found that his new bike was stolen. Getting so upset and angry, he and his friend decided to try finding it back.
His friend carried him with his bike 搜寻 in that area,抱着一丝希望，hoping that the thief has not go too far. By chance, they found a man who was riding a bike the same as his lost one. Because of he has made a sign on his bike before, he could recognize the bike at first sight. “Please stop, sir!” he shouted.however, quite reverse, the riding man speed up at once. at that moment, the two 嫉恶如仇的boys could conclude that he 就是 the thief. So his friend rode his bike to catch the thief while he was running after them. Due to not knowing that terrain so much, the thief soon rode into an impassable lane. The two boys rus
里面语法的小毛病比较多。另外感觉是很生硬的汉语翻译过来。
楼主这篇文章是练习还是正式需要的？如果比较重要，你给我发消息，我过几个小时之后回来可以帮你认真修改。
对啊,好象有点中国式英语,所以语法错误比较多,再看看吧