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today i heard a story from the radio which is about two friends. i was deeply moved by it.
two friends were walking along the seaside.due to some unknow raasons,they began to argue. their points were too different that the arguement became severer and one of them suddenly slapped the other one in the face.they all immediately calmed down. without saying anything,the one who got slapped bent down to write" today my best friend slapped me in the face." they kept walking silently until they went into a forest. unexpectely, the one who had been slapped was trapped in the mire and started drowning.but his friend saved him without any hesitation.after going ashore ,the rescuer carved on a stone" today my best friend saved my life." getting stranged again,his friend couldn't help asking him why he left those sentences all the way. he relied" when someone hurts us we should write
it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase it away.butwhen some

Today I heard a story on the radio which is about two friends. I was deeply moved by it.
Two friends were walking along the seaside. due to some unknown reasons, they began to argue. Their points were so different that the argument became serious and one of them suddenly slapped the other one in the face. They both calmed down immediately. Without saying anything, the one which got slapped bent down to write" today my best friend slapped me in the face." They kept walking silently until they went into a forest. Unexpectedly, the one which had been slapped was trapped in the mire and started drowning. His friend saved him without any hesitation. After going ashore ,the one who was rescued carved on a stone" Today my best friend saved my life." Getting strange again, his friend couldn't help asking him why he left those sentences all the way. He replied" when someone hurts us we should write
it down in sand where winds of forgiveness can erase