UC知道帮忙批改一篇英语小段文
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Deng yaping was born on the 2nd of June 1978 she started to play table tennis. after five years she joined the Hennan table tennis It was a hard thing but she Was hard. So after five years she joined the national table tennis team played for her national team. she liked study very much when she was 24 years she want to Tsinghua University major in Enlish and management she also liked table tennis .she from 1993 to 1998 she became the number one women’s singles player in the ITTF
It was a hard thing but she Was hard你的意思应该是她努力练习吧 如果是的话 应该用 she worked very hard
after five years she joined the national table tennis team played for her national team.
这里的play应该用非谓语的形式，而且是主动用法，所以该用playing
she want to Tsinghua University major in Enlish and management
应该是她去清华吧 want 变went major这里是动词，该用非谓语形式 majoring
she from 1993 to 1998 这里的she是多余的，因为后面有she了已经
基本已经全了，其余的就是标点符号了。
Born on 2nd June, 1978, Deng Yaping started her career in the sport of table tennis when she was very young. Five years later she entered the Henan Table Tennis Team-it was very difficult and she trained very hard. After another five years she moved to the next step and became a member of the Chinese Table Tennis Team.
Even as a professional player, she greatly likes and insists studying. She entered TsingHua University for her major of English and management.
Deng Yaping loves table tennis very much, and seemingl