帮忙修改我写的中英文证明!!谢谢!

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Insurance Certificate
尊敬的客户:
您好!
我公司##愿意对与贵司合作过程中,因我方操作不当而产生的后果承担一切责任。但如果因客户方或第三方的原因而造成的意外,则由事故责任方承担。

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN:
This is to certify that our company ## will take full responsibility if there any misoperation caused by our company during the cooperation with **. Whereas if any accident caused by ** or the third party, then it will afford by the tenant.
我觉得我的翻译过于中式了,请各位英语高手帮忙按照专业的方式给予修改!!改好,追加分数!!!!太谢谢了!!!

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN
This is to certify that our company would like to bear full reaponsibilities caused by our improper operation during the cooperation with you.But the accidents caused by customers or the third party should attach to the related responsible parties.

你翻译的也不错,就是有些词用的不够专业.建议有空多看看外贸函电,上面很多东西在工作中都用的到.

TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN
This is to certify that our company would like to bear full reaponsibilities caused by our improper operation during the cooperation with you.But the accidents caused by customers or the third party should attach to the related responsible parties.