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Hello, everyone here. Today I like to give my presentation about today and tomorrow.

we know that there are many discussions about the topic, which teach us to stress on today but not waste the time, tomorrow is far away, we need to do our task that's should be done today and can't be left to do tomorrow, so today's topic I want to give my opinion about the topic.

First, we know we have to pass today, without today we can't have tomorrow, so many of us say today is more important than tomorrow. However, it’s safe to say that we can't miss tomorrow. If we have a very sad day today, we still want to have a good time today; the answer is of course not. We hope we can have a new happy day tomorrow, and forget about the things today. What’s more, lots of philosophers say that the work need to be done should be finish today but to last tomorrow. Yes, it's true we need to do our job in the right time in our ability, but we can see that if we can

Hello, everyone here. Today I‘d like to give a presentation about today and tomorrow.

we know that there are many discussions about the topic, which teaches us to stress on today but not to waste the time, tomorrow is far away, we need to do our task that should be done today and can't be left until tomorrow, （so today's topic I want to give my opinion about the topic. 抑郁中……）so the topic I want to give you all is
my opinion about the topic 我估计你要表达这个意思，，，）

as we all know, without today we can't have tomorrow, so many of us say today is more important than tomorrow. However, we can't miss tomorrow（******************崩溃ING**************************************
是不是我们不能错过明天啊）. If we have a very sad day today, we still want to have a good time today？ the answer is of course not. We hope we can have a new happy day tomorrow, and forget the bad things today. What’s more, lots of philosophers say that the work need to be done should be finis