中英文对照 哪不对？？？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/25 17:13:02
英文
Green mofang is to provide the organic agricultural products franchise stores
The Green mofang adoption stone mill machine turn soon for every minute 30-60 turn, the temperature onlies have 10 degrees.But the electricity whet of turn soon for 500-1000 turn every minute, the temperature is up to 120 degrees.The heat whetted to break the nourishment composition of the wheat.The organic stone mill product returns your real nourishment to enjoy.
The life that wishes you contain green mill house keep company with

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The average rotational speed of the flour milling stone is 30-60 turns per minute, and the temperature is only 10 degrees. On the other hand, the average rotational speed of the electric mill is 500-800 turns per minute to the temperature as high as 120 degrees.
High temperature milling wheat undermined the nutritional ingredients.You would be likely to have a healthy life accompanied by the green mofang. 用哪个好 帮忙编辑下

中文
绿磨

给你第三个选择:
Green Mill provides the organic agricultural products. The flour we sell is milled with stone-made mills which rotational speeds are only 30-60 rpm，and the working temperature is only 10 celsius degrees. Meanwhil the speed of the electric mill is about 500-800 rpm and its working temperature is as high as 120 celsius degrees which will make the flour lose its nutritions. With Green Mill, you can get more healthy.
Enjoy your life with Green Mill.

第一个版本完全不符合英语的语法,
第二个语法没什么问题,但问题是你是卖石磨还是卖食品?
用我的版本吧!

The Green Mill adopts an millstones of which rotational speed is 30-60rmp and its temperature is only 10 degrees. while the electril mill's rotational speed is 500-1000rmp, but its temperature is up to 120 degrees. High temperature grind will ruin the nutritional compostions of wheat.You will have a healthy life once you accompanied by an organic millstones.Wish you enjoy your life with Green Mill.