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Mary is my friend. A young sports stars! I feel very lucky. Our friendship is sincere。In my memory, as a child he liked to swim, 8-year-old near the diving team. She will treasure this opportunity and serious training. When 13-year-old with outstanding achievements into the national team. A year after the Asian Games champion, the 10th World Swimming Championships. This year was the 29th Olympic Games gold medal. I presented her a bouquet of flowers. We are particularly happy

玛丽是我的朋友。一位年轻的体育明星！我觉得非常幸运。因为我们的友谊是真诚的。在我的记忆中，他非常喜欢游泳，她8岁进入的跳水队。她很珍惜这个机会和严格的培训。在13岁以优异的成绩进入国家队。是一年后的亚运会冠军，第十届世界游泳锦标赛。今年是第29届奥运会金牌。我很高兴的送了她一束鲜花。我们高兴、。

Mary is the friend of mine. A young sports star! I thought that is lucky. Because our friendship is sincere. In mine memory, he likes swimming, her 8 year-old enter diving team. She treasures this opportunity and strict training very much. Enters the national sports team in 13 years old by the outstanding result. Is one year later Asian Games champion, tenth world swimming championships. This year is the 29th Olympic Games gold medal. As soon as I very happy delivered her to tie the fresh flower. We happy.

Mary is my friend. A young sports star! I feel very lucky. Our friendship is sincere。In my memory, as a child he liked swimming, at the age of 8 she was admitted to the diving team. She will treasure this opportunity and serious training. When she was 13 years old with outstanding achievements she went into the natio