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teacher should be paid according to their students' performs
Today, teachers are working hard in school longing for the desirable income, they have to care every students' performs, including homework, security and so forth. However, some teachers were paid according to their student's performs. With doing that, students can not get a good sleep. So, I believe that teachers should not be paid according to their student's performs for the following reasons.
Firstly, being paid according to their students' performs could lead them unhappy. Some students like playing basketball, and they hope that they can play in the NBA ground one day. Teachers do not allowed them to play basketball, and it can decrease their salary. In that case, students can not achieve happiness in the play ground. In addition, Some teachers might be unhappy because they have a lot of naughty students who do not listen their teachers order. The income must be deminish, and teache

Teachers should be paid according to their students' performances.
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