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Facing the dilemma on whether to choose a job that meets the interests or a job that can only earn a lot of money, consequences are varying from person to person. Along with the development of the society, tendency that people begin to focus more on the mental needs are mixing into the mainstream gradually. Hence, I agree with the idea that a job that one enjoy is more important than it is to gain a lot of money.
Initially, motivation is the very basic requirement to the consistent working, with interest is widely acknowledged as the most positive and permanent source that force some one to work. Take a example to illustrate the idea: it is generally accepted that time goes faster than we expected when we do something enjoyable. That is, we feel strongly of delight and pleasure while doing things in out interests.
Secondly, great interest
Facing the dilemma on whether to choose a job that meets the interests or a job that can only earn a lot of money, consequences are varying from person to person. 这句话的主语是“consequences”，而该主语不可能facing the dilemma,而是people facing the dilemma. 写这样的句子一定要小心，如果不确定，就不要用分词开头，写明主语比较好。
a job that one enjoy is more important than it is to gain a lot of money. than的前后要一致，前面是a job，后面的主语也要是 a job，通常可以用that代替。
Initially, motivation is the very basic requirement to the consistent working, with interest is widely acknowledged as the most positive and permanent source that force some one to work. with是介词，后面不能跟整个句子。
Secondly, great interests result in work with high effective and high quality。 effective是形容词，换个正确名词形式。
we might easily come up with an question that how we can complete the bunch of work in the limited time and certain quality required? 这里不时疑问句，不应该用问号。
Therefore, interest is of the most importance.
这个太绝对了，可以加一个词，interest is one of