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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/13 22:42:22
In real life, people gradually improve living standards and the needs of the people's living standards, the vehicle slowly into high-tech products of people's lives. Private car travel convenience for people, but the use of private cars have to pay expensive. For example, to buy expensive gasoline, the annual cost to pay. So the bus, many people have been good and cheaper. However, the lack of distance from the bus every day to reach the station, a bus traveling when the accident occurred, and slowly the plug will not be able to continue driving. My personal view is that the need for better than a bus 这篇文章的语法 有错误吗?语序?
这是我用在线翻译翻译出来的.

帮你重写一遍：

In real life, people are gradually improving their living standards as well as their need for higher living standards, and varies types of vehicles people utilize today are slowly moving into hi-tech products. Private cars allow for convenience of travelling for people, but the expense people have to pay for that is also high. For example, to purchase expensive gasoline, annual costs increase. Therefore, many people have chosen buses as the better and cheaper way of transportation. However, the extra distance traveled to reach a bus station, a possibility of delay due to an accident on the way and other situations represent a number of disadvantages. In my own opinion, a better alternative for transporation than the bus is currently in need.

我是给你意译的，不一定每句话都一样。你要是把中文原文放上来，我可以翻译的更好些。

我只读了前三句话，就发现这篇文章的作者既无语感，又无基础。
首先，一般时第三人称单数时，动词无变化。其次一个句子里没有动词。再次，gradually是逐渐的，是一个正在进行的感觉，比较贴切的，我认为，应该是进行时。

这篇文章太乱了，你应该把原文贴出来让大家翻译！

In real life, peo