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When one becoming eighteen years old, he not only has a maturity stable character, also has the courage to take responsibility and obligation;
To be an adult, everything try to behave in a more grown up way.
Eighteen years old, full of challenge and opportunity;
Eighteen years old, the beginning of life, the sign of transition to maturity;
Eighteen years old, congition of self, cultivate your garden, contribution of self;(认识自我,完善自我,奉献自我,这句话我翻译的不好)
If life is a line, eigteen years old, no doubt, is the golden section ratio of the line.
Eighteen years old, less verdancy, more maturity;
Eighteen years old, less impulse, more rational;
Eighteen years old, less dependence, more independence.
I'll open my heart to accept the gift of life.
At the end of this year,i'll be eighteen-year-old(或者eighteen years old).
When one becomes(when连词，链接两个句子，应该要用谓语动词) eighteen years old, he not only has a maturity stable character, but also has the courage to take responsibility and obligation;
To be an adult, one should try to behave in a more grown-up(作为形容词，修饰way) way. (everything不能behave，主语要改成人，整篇文章都是第三人称单数的，这里也是)
Being eighteen-year-old is full of challenge and opportunity;
Being eighteen-year-old is the beginning of life, and the sign of transition to maturity;
Being eighteen-year-old is knowing oneself better, making oneself better and devoting oneself more.
If life is a line, being eigteen-year-old, no doubt, is the turning point of this line(18岁毫无疑问将是人生的转折点)
(你想说的其实就是重要性了，但是黄金分割点是说在分割时．在长度为全长的约0.618处进行分割。18岁不可能占生命的0.618吧。。。。。。。个人理解）
Being eighteen-year-old means less verdancy but more maturity;
Being eighteen-year-old means less impulse but more ra