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This year, the most unusual year I've ever lived through. And may be not only for me but also our country, and even the whole world ……
Actually, I still don’t want to think about the earthquake, the heavy snow at the beginning of the year, the disease, or the accidents I have heard. Those made the year special and full of sensation. And the Olympic game, that’s really enjoyable, fantastic, and…exciting. Yeah, we were deeply moved for not just once, and it brought us 17 special days.
Next, for me, there were lots of things I had never done before.
when you were gone Wings, left me, and hurt me deeply on the bottom of my heart, I heard the song when you were gone with tear in my eyes, stared out of the bright windows…I still remember how hopeless I felt.
Then I really understood what were the lives of the students in Grade 3 in junior school. During the busy term, and the stressful days, I also saw the damn thing that out of the blue, s

下面是我找的语法问题:
may be\是may-be[I can’t find my watch. It may be in your pocket.
我找不到我的手表了,它可能在你的口袋里。 ]
...I still don’t want to think about the earthquake...[don’t ]\该是did'nt
...and it brought us 17 [special days]\用最高级比较好..most
...Next, [for me]..\如果是‘那么我、至于我..’该是as for me
...there were lots of things [I had never done before]\我认为是这样比较好;i do nothing befor...
....and [hurt ]me deeply on the bottom of my heart\hurt做动词?一般都是I was hurt..做名词比较好...我个人意见.呵呵~~[你也没错的]
... you were gone with [tear] in my eyes\是tears的,眼泪是有,但你哭的时候不可能只流一滴,所以用复数..
...stared out of the bright [windows]\加冠词the..