两个英文短文改错

A
Many years ago there had abusinessman
named Hank. He was the most richest man in
the country. He had large, strong boxes filling
with gold, and his storehouses was full of
cheap goods. He owned land,houses and
gardens. Though he was such rich,he
spent least than the poorest beggar in the
city. He ate only dates and bread, or wore
his clothing for ten years before he bought
new ones. He had not bought nes shoes since
thirty years.

B
In March,12,2006,all the students in our
class went to suburb of our city to plant trees.
We arrive at the planting place at 9o'clock. The
teacher asked every of us to plant 5 trees at least.
Then we start digging,planting and watering. All
of us were going all out finish our task,afraid of
falling behind. Our monitor set our a good example.
Although he was ill, but he accepted his task and
finishes it ahe

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