英语短文改错

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In the past, I do not give gifts to my
friends on their birthdays.I thought it unnecessarily. I thought that if I gave a friend a gift on birthday,he would also give it to me on mine;actually we didn't give each other's gifts.And I also thought it was a waste of time and money.Now I do not think this.I think we need to do that.At home,we under our parents' care,but outside we have to depend on our friend. We need to make a lot of friends.I believe the best way to make our friends is to give gifts
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In the past, I do(did) not give gifts to my friends on their birthdays.I thought it unnecessarily(unnecessary). I thought that if I gave a friend a gift on (加his) birthday,he would also give it(one) to me on mine;actually we didn't give each other's (other)gifts.And I also thought it was a waste of time and money.Now I do not think this(so).I think we need to do that.At home,we (are) under our parents' care,but outside we have to depend on our friend(friends). We need to make a lot of friends.I believe the best way to make our( 删去) friends is to give gifts.

In the past, I do not give gifts to my
friends on their birthdays.I thought it unnecessarily. I thought that if I gave friend a gift on birthday,he would also give it to me on mine;actually we didn't give each other's gifts.And I also thought it was a waste of time and money.Now I do not think (like) this.I think we need (TO去掉) do that.At home,we under our parents' care,but outside we have to