请教一篇英语文章

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/08 20:11:37
你, Tom Leo (tomleo@lenovo.com) , 作为Lenovo公司的研发人员, 需要给GCC 公司的 Marry Wang (mwang@gcc.com) 写一封Email, 你需要表达的信息有:

1. 感谢对方上周四邀请你参加GCC举办的晚会;

2. 邀请对方公司的技术总监(CTO),Mr. White参加定于2月10日下午2:
30在君悦酒店举行的2009年Lenovo技术论坛 (LENOVO TECH FORUM 2009),并做有关最新互联网技术的演说;

3. 请Mary Wang转问Mr. White他有什么特殊要求;

4. 感谢Mary Wang为此做出的努力;

不是我不劳而获,我自己已经写了,我是想看一下有心的文章,对比一下。
谢谢了。

楼上有语法错误。。

以下是一个在加拿大的留学生为你写的:

Dear Marry:

Thank you for your invitation to the evening party of GCC last Thursday!

As a research and development employee of Lenovo, I sincerely invite the CTO of your company - Mr White, with great pleasure, to attend our Lenovo Tech Forum of 2009 to present the latest Internet technologies. The forum has been scheduled 2:30PM on the 10th day of February at Junyue Hotel. We will be honored if Mr White attends this forum.

Please inform me anytime if Mr White has any special requirements for this presentation.

Lastly, thank you again for your undoubtful effort! I look forward to see your reply.

-----------------------------------("-"代表空格)Sincerely
------------------------------------------Tom Leo
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吾辈尽力了,你加油!

自己写的:

Dear Marry:

Thanks for the invention of the GCC party in the ev