请英语高手帮我修改英文语法

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/10 15:57:47
Ulehlova et al [30] and Bohne et al [31] also show that the hair cell density was varying with position in the cochlea and with cochlear length. Average densities of the inner and outer hair cells decreased with increasing cochlear length [30,31]. The mean cochlear length is significantly shorter in females than in males [28], thus, average densities of OHCs in females were larger than in males. The sex-dependent differences in the frequency distribution of SSOAEs may more correlate with the distribution and the densities of OHCs between the sexes. During maturation, according to the length difference of the cochlea, some mechanism of regulation of OHC appeared to differ between the sexes, especially in the pattern of distribution of OHC in the cochlea, which might have resulted in the sex-dependent difference in SSOAEs [19].
再看看结论写的怎么样： Conclusions: The overall distribution of frequency of SSOAEs in 2- to 4-day-old neonates had the similar mature ‘peak-valley-peak’ distribution p

第三句
The mean cochlear length ....
mean 改为 average 更符合语言习惯
... males [28], thus, average densities .... were larger ....
average 前面加 the, were 变 are.

第四句
... SSOAEs may more correlate with ...
这个 more 的用法很显然是中文化了，呵呵。我根据上下文猜测，应该改成 may correlate more intimately with ...，或者使用类似的形容词。

第五句
appeared 用原型，注意时态嘛。

结论也是，论文用一般时就可以了。用双引号。
大体上不错嘛，留学多少年了？呵呵。