句子帮忙改下错.

Crows begging for food are like noisy baby requesting for toys.
这个baby改成babies。因为crows是复数。
requesting for 可以改为requesting，因为request是及物动词，不需要跟介词。
其他的挺好的。

Falling leaves of autumn were like the beautiful butterflies dancing in the sky.
Snow covered the trees were like old men wearing new clothes.
Crows begging for food are like noisy baby requesting for toys.
A gaint louisy motorcycle is like a strong fast stallion.

Falling autumn leaves are like beautiful butterflies , dancing in the sky.
Snow-covered trees are like old men wearing new clothes.
Crows begging for food are like noisy baby asking for toys.
A huge loud motorcycle is like a strong fast stallion. (right)

没有错

Falling autumn leaves are like beautiful butterflies dancing in the sky.
Snow covered trees are like old men wearing new clothes.
Crows begging for food are like noisy babies requesting for toys.
A huge loud motorcycle is like